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GABRIEL


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Author: Jaxon Brawly
Artist: Jaxon Brawly
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Type: Other
Status: Ongoing
Description: Now that Young Gabriel has discovered the Godly realm of Ourania, he soon discovers that the definition of God that he is familiar with on earth and that which they define themselves is quite different. After witnessing the tragic and dark side of the ever glamorous and royal facade of the GOD Civilzation, he decides to show these Gods of the new age the true definition of a God and redeem the universe from its cruel past. Determined to become the Supreme God master, he sets off on his quest. To face against the thousands of leagues of Gods in his way to the top , he must have a league of his own. The race to the throne is about to begin, but the first trial at the Grand Academy of OURANIA awaits.
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13 tags? really?

Ahh...  Thanks for your effort in resizing ch. 1.  It looks much better.
 
The story line of this does look intriguing and I am indeed curious to see where it goes from here.  So I will be following this.
 
One note...  You might want to get a proofreader to help you with the grammar.  There were a few times where it wasn't exactly clear in its meaning, but overall, it did flow pretty well.  See spoiler below:

 

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Well it's important that someone nitpick and correct my mistakes, so I can make the next chapter better. THANKYOU for taking the time and typing it PervySageChuck, I really appreciate it and I will most certainly correct this on the next chapter.

Ahh...  Thanks for your effort in resizing ch. 1.  It looks much better.

 

The story line of this does look intriguing and I am indeed curious to see where it goes from here.  So I will be following this.

 

One note...  You might want to get a proofreader to help you with the grammar.  There were a few times where it wasn't exactly clear in its meaning, but overall, it did flow pretty well.  See spoiler below:

 

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Hello PervySageChuck and everyone, I've released chapter one in good definition. Please read, enjoy, follow and rate. THANKYOU

I approved the third chapter. It's good, but I should warn you that images on Batoto are not resized on the site's servers, so each one of your pages is served to the user in their full resolution (gigantic) and then re-sized in the browser. Not only does this make the download of each page slow, some browsers resize better than others... some can muck up the re-sizing causing the image and text to look jagged or blurry.

 

Most scanlation groups resize their images to be between 1200px and 1600px tall. The width is usually less than 800 as well for non-spread pages. This allows for a small image download size with the right Photoshop export options (png for greyscale, 32 colors at most), but large enough resolution for quality reading.

 

Obviously you don't have to force your images into that resolution (you do you), I'm just offering info :)

The second chapter is in better detail. Please read, enjoy and follow. THANKYOU.

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Thanks for the Review PervySageChuck. I will most definitely look into that on my next chapter. Really appreciate you taking the time and effort. Sorry for the poor quality. I promise it will be corrected in the next chapter.

 

 

No  problem, my friend!  I just wish that I had the technical knowledge to help you out, but my skills with Photoshop are extremely poor.  You might want to google some help sites on scanlating or ask someone in a well established group for the specific steps needed to re-size a page without losing any of the definition or detail in the artwork.

 

I hope that you can redo the first chapter as the premise in the description above sounds interesting and I'd like to check this series out from the very beginning.

 

Also, if you ever need any advice on grammar, spelling, punctuation, or alternate phrasing, please PM me here at Batoto and I would be happy to help with any Grammar Nazi problems you might encounter.

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I'm afraid that the pages are so small that even when I zoom in at 200%, the texts in the bubbles are still mostly illegible to me, even on my 65 inch plasma TV that I use as a monitor.  So unless you resize your uploaded pages and sharpen the typesetting, I can't follow this story.   I believe that most groups use a page height of from 1200 to 1600 pixels and yours appear to be less than half of that.
Thanks for the Review PervySageChuck. I will most definitely look into that on my next chapter. Really appreciate you taking the time and effort. Sorry for the poor quality. I promise it will be corrected in the next chapter.

I'm afraid that the pages are so small that even when I zoom in at 200%, the texts in the bubbles lose definition and are still mostly illegible to me, even on my 65 inch plasma TV that I use as a monitor.  So unless you re-size your uploaded pages and sharpen the typesetting, I can't follow this story.

 

I believe that most groups use a page height of from 1200 to 1600 pixels and yours appear to be less than half of that.  I am merely a proofreader in another group and unfortunately can't tell you just how to go about re-sizing and sharpening up the texts and the images for a larger size, but I am sure that there are people out there who could give you some good advice on how to accomplish this.

Thank you all for taking the time to read the first chapter. The second chapter is on its way. I promise the plot is way deeper and mysterious in this long series. Please follow. It helps a lot. Thank you.

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